Do you think husbands and wives have different responsibilities according to their gender? Give some
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Hi, Jedah. This is my first time to write an essay in English! It was really difficult :-( If there’s anything wrong or unnatural, please let me know. I would love to hear any advice from you. Help me please. Thank you!
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-Teacher Jedah
Hi, Jedah. This is my first time to write an essay in English!
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It was really difficult :-(
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If there’s anything wrong or unnatural, please let me know.
>>CORRECT
I would love to hear any advice from you.
>>CORRECT
Help me please. Thank you!
>>CORRECT
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