Do you think it is appropriate to celebrate Halloween today? Why or Why not? Explain your answer.

2018-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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On October 31, many western countries mark Halloween Halloween is just around the corner I heard that Halloween is one of the best holidays in America. But In Korea, there are four traditional holidays: New Year's Day, Hansik, Dano, and Chuseok. In fact, we don't celebrate Halloween in Korea

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On October 31, many western countries mark Halloween
>> October 31 marks the Halloween in many Western countries.

Halloween is just around the corner
>> Halloween is just around the corner.

I heard that Halloween is one of the best holidays in America.
>> CORRECT

But In Korea, there are four traditional holidays: New Year\'s Day, Hansik, Dano, and Chuseok.
>> However, there are four traditional holidays in Korea, New Year\'s Day, Hansik, Dano and Chuseok.

In fact, we don\'t celebrate Halloween in Korea

>> In fact, we don\'t celebrate Halloween in Korea.

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