Do you think it is better to be single or to be married?
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I think both have pros and cons of getting married.
First, They who are single can spare a lot of time for themselves. Incase the womens have gotten married or a baby, they have a tendency to quit their job to take care of a baby and husband except few job like government officers and expertise in a field.
To enjoy their own life and do something they want, Some people delay getting married.
But the reason why i decided to getting married is what i have a partner for a long time. In the future, When i undergo something special like adversities for my life, That would get through with a partner.
In a personal opinon about getting marreid, It is nessassary for me in doing something with.
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I think both have pros and cons of getting married.
>> I think both have pros and cons of getting married.
First, They who are single can spare a lot of time for themselves.
>>>> First, those who are single can have a lot of spare time for themselves.
Incase the womens have gotten married or a baby, they have a tendency to quit their job to take care of a baby and husband except few job like government officers and expertise in a field.
>>>> In case women get married or have a baby, most of them, except for a few government officers and some who work in specialized fields, have a tendency to quit their jobs to take care of their families.
To enjoy their own life and do something they want, Some people delay getting married.
>>>> To enjoy their own lives and do the things they want, some people delay getting married.
But the reason why i decided to getting married is what i have a partner for a long time.
>>>>But the reason why I decided to get married is because I\'ve been together with my partner for a long.
In the future, When i undergo something special like adversities for my life, That would get through with a partner.
>>>> In the future, when I undergo or face some adversities, I would get through them with my partner.
In a personal opinon about getting marreid, It is nessassary for me in doing something with.
>>>> In my own opinion, it is necessary for me to do something about it.
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