Do you think it is better to kill animals who are threat to us people?

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Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic. I guess the puma left no choice to the police. It would\'ve been better if they just shot the animal with a high dosage of tranquilizer, so they can still preserve its life. Keep your compositions coming!

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First of all, I have to reveal that I am not a guy who loves animals.
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When I was young, my family was raising a dog at my garden.

>>> When I was young, my family raised a dog in my garden.  

There wasn\'t any problem except the time that our family took a trip. 

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>> OR: There wasn\'t any problem about its health until our family took a trip.

The topic could be very sensitive, because animals are also lives like humans.

>>> The topic could be very sensitive, because animals also live like humans.

I think we must find another way if animals are threaten us such as finding good way to catch them or installing a fence around the area which people are living.

>>> I think we must find another way for animal threats such as finding a good way to catch them, or installing a fence around the area which people are living.

There was an accident about animals threaten few months ago.

>>> There was an incident about animal threats a few months ago.

The puma escaped from the zoo and then it went out to the city. 

>>> The puma escaped from the zoo, and then it went out to the city.

People were shocked and worried about if it hurt people. 

>>> People were shocked and worried about if it will hurt people. 

Finally, polices have decided to kill it when they found the puma. 

>>> Finally, the police have decided to kill it when they found the puma. 

I felt really sorry for it.

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I think that there would be good way to catch it instead to kill it.

>>> I think that there would be a better way to catch it instead of killing it.  

There were a lot of controversies about the accident. 

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>>> OR: There were a lot of controversies about the incident. 

When I read the comments that internet users put on the online, I thought it was the best choice which kill the animal. Because somebody could die......

>>> When I read the comments of citizens online, I thought killing the animal was the best choice because if not somebody could die.