Do you think it is easier for a man or a woman to be single?
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It would be much easier for a woman to be single because of various reasons. Especially when people are old, a woman tends to live a happier life by herself than a man. Many researches and surveys show that a single woman is more satisfied than a man with her life without her significant other. It seems to be true when I actually look at single people around me. A single man looks somewhat lonely and pity. Even if he is making a lot of money and regarded as a successful person socially, his life seems to lack something. Is it just my personal perception? Whereas, many single woman in our society live a decent life. They often travel to all kinds of exotic locations all over the world. They lie down on a beach and enjoy tanning under the sun. They have their own luxury cars and enjoy driving during the weekend. They often go to see a famous musical or a movie. A single man often has a hard time to spend quality time. They often kill time by drinking without doing meaningful things.
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Good afternoon Sir [이름]!
Thanks again for making my day!Happy Tuesday to you! How was your day?
I absolutely agree with you.
There are people who prefers to be single rather than to have a partner.
They say that they will be able to achieve all of their goals because they don\'t have to think about other things.
But I think single men are also happy and satisfied.
It is because they can do whatever they want to like single women.
Anyway, we can talk more about this later in class.
Have a fun day. Take care!Teacher Nina
It would be much easier for a woman to be single because of various reasons.
>> Correct!
Especially when people are old, a woman tends to live a happier life by herself than a man.
>> Correct!
Many researches and surveys show that a single woman is more satisfied than a man with her life without her significant other.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Many researches and surveys show that a single woman is more satisfied than a man with her life without a partner..
It seems to be true when I actually look at single people around me.
>> Correct!
A single man looks somewhat lonely and pity.
>> Correct!
Even if he is making a lot of money and regarded as a successful person socially, his life seems to lack something.
>> Correct!
>> Did you mean: Even if he is making a lot of money and regarded as a successful person, there is still something lacking in his life.
>> OR: Even if he is earning a lot of money and regarded as a socially successful person, there is still something lacking in his life.
Is it just my personal perception?
>> Correct!
Whereas, many single woman in our society live a decent life.
>> Correct!
They often travel to all kinds of exotic locations all over the world.
>> Correct!
They lie down on a beach and enjoy tanning under the sun.
>> Correct!
They have their own luxury cars and enjoy driving during the weekend.
>> Correct!
They often go to see a famous musical or a movie.
>> Correct!
A single man often has a hard time to spend quality time.
>> Correct!
They often kill time by drinking without doing meaningful things.
>> They often kill their time by drinking without doing meaningful things.
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