Do you think it is important for men to join the military service in South Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
The older people have to say it\'s \"Yes\" in South Korea, but people say to it\'s \" No\" in this generation. Because the young people don\'t think it is important. Even though it\'s a part of society, there are so many absurd things.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
Can you be more specific on what they agree and disagree to? hehehe.
The older people have to say it\'s \"Yes\" in South Korea, but people say to it\'s \" No\" in this generation.
>> Older people usually have to say yes here in South Kore but most people in this generation usually say no.
Because the young people don\'t think it is important.
>> This is because people think that things are not that important.
Even though it\'s a part of society, there are so many absurd things.
>> Even though it\'s a part of the society, there are still so many absurd things nowadays.
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