Do you think it is important for men to join the military service in South Korea? Why or why not?

2022-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it is important for men to join the military service in South Korea. Because someone have to defend our countries.

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Yes, that\'s true. This is for the safety and protection of South Korea against other countries that wants to colonize it.

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I think it is important for men to join the military service in South Korea.

>> I think it is important for men to join the military service in South Korea because someone has to defend our country.

Because someone have to defend our countries.

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