Do you think it is important to be open-minded when helping other
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Most of people love that they are looked open-minded by other people. I also love it. And i try to be open-minded person. But when i meet with selfish people, i hate to be open-minded. They just want to take advantage for me. So i try to discriminate whether he is likely to take advantage for me or not when they ask me a help.
There are traits for this type of person. You know their traits are to want to have a lot of things even if they have a lot of things already. Before you give a hand, you should figure out what they have practically
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You wrote your answers well, [이름]! I must say that we are on the same page, so we should always be extra careful when lending a hand. See you!-Faith-
Most of people love that they are looked open-minded by other people.
>> Most people love that they look open-minded to other people. I also love it. And i try to be open-minded person.
>> I also love it, so I try to be an open-minded person.
But when i meet with selfish people, i hate to be open-minded.
>> However, when I meet selfish people, I hate to be open-minded.
They just want to take advantage for me. So i try to discriminate whether he is likely to take advantage for me or not when they ask me a help.
>> They give me the impression that they just want to take advantage of me, so I try to observe whether they are likely to take advantage of me or not when they ask me for help.
There are traits for this type of person.
>> They give me the impression that they just want to take advantage of me, so I try to observe whether they are likely to take advantage of me or not when they ask me for help.
There are traits for this type of person.
>> CORRECT
OR There are unique characteristics of this kind of person.
You know their traits are to want to have a lot of things even if they have a lot of things already.
>> They want to have more even if they have a lot of things already.
OR They have a strong desire for more and more possessions.
Before you give a hand, you should figure out what they have practically
>> Before you give a hand, you should figure out what they have practically.
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