Do you think it is important to follow a country’s customs when you visit there?
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I think that following country\'s customs when we visit there are really important things, because there are differences between one country and others.
>>> I think that following country\'s customs when we visit there is really important, because there are differences between one country to another.
If people ignore one\'s country customs, they might have hard time in the place which they visit.
>>> If people ignore a country\'s custom, they might have a hard time in the place which they visit.
I would like to show the example about culture of the ARAB country.
>>> I would like to show the example about the culture of the Arab country.
The tourists should not drink water or eat food when it is Ramadan period.
>>> correct!
Local people can\'t eat anything during sun rises due to their religious belief.
>>> Local people can\'t eat anything when the sun rises due to their religious belief. So they might be angry at somebody who try to have drinks or foods, because they would be sensitive when they are fasting.
>>> They might be angry at somebody who tries to have drinks or foods, because they follow a strict rule when they are fasting.
I know that we can find really ridiculous laws and regulations.
>>> correct!
However, we must acknowledge and respect of the customs of each countries.
>>>However, we must acknowledge and respect the customs of each country.
Because, that is how they live and they will be improved by themselves, if they think to be changed.
>>> [Do you mean: Because, that is how they live and they will defend their religious belief if the government will try to change it.]
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