Do you think it is just right to block Chinese people from entering Korea? Why or why not?
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Do you think it is just right to block Chinese people from entering Korea? Why or why not?
I do not agree with to block Chinese people from entering Korea.
>>> I do not agree blocking Chinese people from entering Korea.
Firstly China is very huge nation.
>>> Firstly China is a very huge nation.
Even though some Chinese people are in struggle with their disease but not everyone.
>>> Even though some Chinese people are struggling with their disease but not everyone.
So I think it is not proper or not good all the Chinese people block from entering Korea.
>>> So I think it is not proper or not good that all Chinese people will be blocked from entering Korea.
Well, I do not agree with to block Chinese but it is very important to set up process to prevent spread of disease.
>>> Well, I do not agree blocking Chinese but it is very important to set up processes to prevent the disease from spreading.
For example before taking the airplane or ship there should have inspection process for the disease.
>>> For example before taking the airplane or ship there should be screening.
And after arriving at Korea, Korea government should inspect all of the Chinese from China and should tracking their movement using their mobile phone under their agreement.
>>> After arriving in Korea, the government should inspect the Chinese who came from China and should track their movement using their mobile phone based on their agreement.
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