Do you think it is more important to make a lot of money or to enjoy your job?
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I think it is more important to make a lot of money. But there are some required conditions. First, the job don`t need to work over time. I have to spend time after work
Second, the job is less to go for business trip. Most of things I like use my computer.
If both of required conditions were satisfied, Then I can earn a lot of money and feel free to play things I like after work.
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I think it is more important to make a lot of money. But there are some required conditions.
>> CORRECT!
First, the job don`t need to work over time.
>> First, the job shouldn\'t need overtime work.
I have to spend time after work
>> I should have some time to spend after work.
Second, the job is less to go for business trip.
>> Second, the job shouldn\'t require a lot of business trips.
Most of things I like use my computer.
>> Most of the time, I should work using my computer.
If both of required conditions were satisfied, then I can earn a lot of money and feel free to play things I like after work.
>> If both of required conditions were met, then I can earn a lot of money and feel free to do the things I like after work.
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