Do you think it is more important to make a lot of money or to enjoy your job?

2019-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I think nowadays it\'s more important to enjoy your job than make a lot of money. When I was twenty, I like my job also It\'s best important make a money. So I always did work overtime. But I think It\'s more important balance between work and life. I try to enjoy my job. It\'s not easy. Because I have been working for 14years. I\'m going to find to way to enjoy job.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eun Young
I do know that we need hope in life and we shouldn\'t lose hope!!!
I know that you will find a way to balance your life and work. Thus you need to be concern with your health first.

Have a great day ahead!!!
T. JenyI

I think nowadays it\'s more important to enjoy your job than make a lot of money.
>>correct
When I was twenty, I like my job also It\'s best important make a money.
>>When I was twenty, I liked my job because it was important to make money.
So I always did work overtime.
>>So I always did overtime work.
But I think It\'s more important balance between work and life.
>>But I think It\'s more important to a balance between work and life.
I try to enjoy my job. It\'s not easy. Because I have been working for 14years.
>>I try to enjoy my job but it is not easy because I have been working for 14 years.
I\'m going to find to way to enjoy job.
>> I\'m going to find a way to enjoy my job.

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