Do you think it is necessary to experiment on animals to test cosmetics and drugs? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
No. I don\'t want to do experiment on animals. Because animals that are on the experiment always dies.Even the experiment is success. I don\'t want that people trivial animals. They don\'t even wanted to be experimented. I can\'t see how they are poor. So I don\'t want people to experiment on animals. 😭😭😿😿
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No. I don\'t want to do experiment on animals.
>>> No. I don\'t want to do experiments on animals.
Because animals that are on the experiment always dies.
>>> Because animals that are under experiment always die.
Even the experiment is success.
>>> Even the experiment is successful.
I don\'t want that people trivial animals.
>>> I don\'t want people trivial animals.
They don\'t even wanted to be experimented.
>>>They don\'t even want to be experimented on.
I can\'t see how they are poor.
>>> I don\'t was to see animals suffer.
So I don\'t want people to experiment on animals.
>>> So, I don\'t want people to experiment on animals.
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