Do you think it is okay to marry someone because of some personal interest ( visa, money, fame)?
학생이 쓴 원문
You can get married without love. Actually, it happens that many people decide to get married due to various reasons although they do not love their partners. Some people think that they can begin to try to love their spouses after getting married. Or they think that love can grow as they live together. Or some people choose to live together forever with maintaining the relationship of the marriage without love. Whatever their reasons and choices are, they could be right and I do respect their decisions of getting married without love. However, what I cannot understand is the people who want to get married for his/her personal interest. They are trying to take advantage of it. Some people look for his/her spouse to get financial support, to get a VISA, to upgrade his/her social status, and so on. These marriages could not be successful and end up leaving scars both in their hearts. It is fraudulent and deceiving your spouse. Would it be acceptable if you were the victim of the fraud.
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Happy hump day Sir [이름]!Thanks for sharing your insights about this topic.
We both don\'t understand why there are people who commit in a relationship because of personal reasons and not love.
You are right, these marriages won\'t be successful.
I believe that when you want to get married, you really love your partner and you want to be with hin/ her for the rest of your life.
Why are there people who accept this kind of situation?
Let us talk more about it in class.
Teacher Nina
You can get married without love.
>> Correct
Actually, it happens that many people decide to get married due to various reasons although they do not love their partners.
>> Correct
>> OR: Actually, it happens that many people decide to get married due to different reasons, although they don\'t have feelings for their partners.
Some people think that they can begin to try to love their spouses after getting married.
>> Correct
Or they think that love can grow as they live together.
>> Correct
Or some people choose to live together forever with maintaining the relationship of the marriage without love.
>> Or some people choose to live together forever with maintaining the relationship of marriage without love.
>> OR: Or some people choose to live together for long and keeping the marriage even without feelings for each other.
Whatever their reasons and choices are, they could be right and I do respect their decisions of getting married without love.
>> Correct
However, what I cannot understand is the people who want to get married for his/her personal interest.
>> Correct
They are trying to take advantage of it.
>> Correct
Some people look for his/her spouse to get financial support, to get a VISA, to upgrade his/her social status, and so on.
>> Correct
These marriages could not be successful and end up leaving scars both in their hearts.
>> Correct
It is fraudulent and deceiving your spouse.
>> Correct
Would it be acceptable if you were the victim of the fraud.
>> Would it be acceptable if you were the victim of fraud?
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