Do you think it is right to keep wild animals in captivity all there life?
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No, wild animals have long lived freely in the wild.
But if people force wild animals to keep them in captivity all there life, it will put a lot of stress on animals.
Also, the nature of hunting will disappear and the food net will collapse.
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No, wild animals have long lived freely in the wild.
>> No, wild animals have long-lived freely in the wild.
But if people force wild animals to keep them in captivity all there life, it will put a lot of stress on animals.
>> But if people force wild animals to keep them in captivity all their life, it will put a lot of stress on animals.
Also, the nature of hunting will disappear and the food net will collapse.
>> CORRECT!
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