Do you think it’s better for students to have a long summer break or be in a year-round school syste

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Some people say that school should be year round with no summer break.

>> Better: Some people say that the school year should be year round with no summer break.

This way students will not have the opportunity to forget the things they learned before and they will work harder because they will see school as more of a job where they get very little time off on a regular basis compared to a summer break.

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>> OR: This way students will not have the opportunity to forget the things they learned before and they will study harder. They will see school as more of a job where they get very little time off on a regular basis compared to a summer break.

However, I personally prefer a long summer break, while having no short breaks during the semester because I can keep on studying.

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Frequent breaks might prevent me from continuing my study.

>> Frequent breaks might prevent me from continuing my studies.

Once you start something, you have to finish it.

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If you stop on the way, we can lose your focus and it takes you more time to warm up and get back on track.

>> If you stop on the way, you can lose your focus and it takes you more time to warm up and get back on track.

You have to revisit where you stopped to resume your study, which is more time consuming and unproductive.

>> You have to revisit where you stopped to resume your studies, which is more time consuming and unproductive.

If you have a long vacation, you can make a plan for various activities that typically require much longer time such as working as an intern, taking some extracurricular lessons, or travelling abroad.

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