Do you think it’s better for students to have a long summer break or be in a year-round school syste

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YOU SAY:

I would like to have a long summer breake.

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* MISPELLED THE WORD BREAKE

>> BREAK

YOU SAY:

Because i can go to vacation for long day and i will play with my friends everyday.

BETTER SAY:

Because I can spend my vacation for a long time. I can also play with my friends everyday.