Do you think it’s easy or difficult to find time to exercise during the day?
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I think it’s difficult to modern people. On the one hand, I understand that they are busy and have their’s own circumstances. But on the other hand, it’s not difficult to them if they really want and work on it. Doing exercise increase their quality of life. And they know who doing exercise steadily.
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Hi Miss. [Name] [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille>> I think it’s difficult for people these days.
On the one hand, I understand that they are busy and have their’s own circumstances.
>> On the other hand, I understand that they are busy and have their own situations.
But on the other hand, it’s not difficult to them if they really want and work on it.
>> However, it’s not difficult for them if they really want and work on it.
Doing exercise increase their quality of life.
>> Doing exercise increases their quality of life.
And they know who doing exercise steadily.
>> And they know who does exercise steadily.
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