Do you think it’s easy or difficult to find time to exercise during the day?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have a strong will it will easy.
It is because exercise are not difficult things.
Before go work, even just 30 minutes I can go jogging at the park.
And in the office, after lunch I can walk around the street and it helpful for digestion.
After work I can go to the gym.
Nowadays I can find the gym everywhere and many people already go there after work.
First time might be hard but if it become a routine it will be easy.
And I really know that exercise can make me healthy and can help loss tiredness.
But in my situation, exercising after work is hard. Actually it is a usual excuse but I want to that if I have many time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Exercise is important for everyone so it is better to find some time to do it. Have a good time with your chosen exercise. ^^
~T. Maine
>> If I have a strong will, it will be easy.
It is because exercise are not difficult things.
It is because exercise are not difficult things.
>> It is because exercise is not a difficult thing to do.
Before go work, even just 30 minutes I can go jogging at the park.
Before go work, even just 30 minutes I can go jogging at the park.
>> Before I go to work for just 30 minutes, I can go jogging at the park.
And in the office, after lunch I can walk around the street and it helpful for digestion.
And in the office, after lunch I can walk around the street and it helpful for digestion.
>> And in the office after lunch, I can walk around the street because it is helpful for my digestion.
After work I can go to the gym.
After work I can go to the gym.
>> After work, I can go to the gym.
Nowadays I can find the gym everywhere and many people already go there after work.
Nowadays I can find the gym everywhere and many people already go there after work.
>> Nowadays, I can find the gym everywhere and many people already go there after work.
First time might be hard but if it become a routine it will be easy.
First time might be hard but if it become a routine it will be easy.
>> The first time might be hard. But if it becomes a routine, it will be easy.
And I really know that exercise can make me healthy and can help loss tiredness.
And I really know that exercise can make me healthy and can help loss tiredness.
>> And I really know that exercise can make me healthy and can help me loss tiredness.
But in my situation, exercising after work is hard.
But in my situation, exercising after work is hard.
>> Correct.
Actually it is a usual excuse but I want to that if I have many time.
>> Actually, it is the usual excuse but I want to have more time.
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