>> Do you think it’s fair that so much of the world’s wealth is in the hands of so few people?
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No. It’s not fair.
10% of high ranking people have 76% world asset and 50% of low ranking people have only 2% world asset.
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Do you think it’s fair that so much of the world’s wealth is in the hands of so few people?
No. It’s not fair.
>>> OR: Certainly not.
10% of high ranking people have 76% world asset and 50% of low ranking people have only 2% world asset.
>>> 10% of high-ranking people have 76% of the world\'s assets and 50% of low-ranking people have only 2% of the world\'s assets. Clearly, there\'s wealth inequality throughout the world\'s population.
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