Do you think it's good to limit the pay of the employees in your country?
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Salary is the one of the important things for business people.
>>> Salary is one of the most important things for businessmen.
If country start limiting their salary level, nobody want to study hard, improve their skill, work more than others do and get promoted.
>>> If the country starts limiting their salary level, nobody wants to study hard, improve their skills, work more than others do and get promoted.
I would like to suggest government to impose tax depending on the salary level and then provide more welfare such as a house support, nursery fee support and support for the people who can not earn enough money that can manage their life.
>>> I would like to suggest to the government to impose tax depending on the salary level, and then provide more welfare such as a house support, nursery fee support, and support for the people who can not earn enough money that can support their life on a daily basis.
We are living under the capitalism country regardless our choice and we saw the collapse of the communism.
>>> We are living under the capitalism country regardless of our choice, and we even saw how the communist government collapsed.
I think that we have to be paid according to our ability, tries and professional attitude.
>>> I think that we have to be paid according to our ability, effort and professional attitude.
However, I strongly want country to increase the lowest wage rather than limit the highest level.
>>> However, I strongly want our country to increase the lowest wage rather than limit the highest salary level.
In addition, country must provide free education without any discrimination according to the status, so then everybody in the country can be successful.
>>> In addition, our country must provide a free education without any discrimination according to the status, so everybody in the country can be successful.
And I want people who are running their country and have a lot of effect to donate the money.
>>> I want people who are running their country have an impact to donate the money to less fortunate people.
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