Do you think it\'s important for kids to choose early what they want to be when they grow up?
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Yes,because kid is not long before a adult and if kids grow up so they are don\'t have time because adult is make money.
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Do you think it\'s important for kids to choose early what they want to be when they grow up?
Yes,because kid is not long before a adult and if kids grow up so they are don\'t have time because adult is make money.
>> Yes, because kids grow up fast, and once they become adults, they\'ll be busy making money.
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