Do you think it\'s important for kids to choose early what they want to be when they grow up?
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I think it\'s very important to support children in whatever they choose to do. I think it\'s good to be able to help them early
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Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I think it\'s very important to support children in whatever they choose to do. I think it\'s good to be able to help them early
>> I think it’s very important to support children in whatever they choose to do. It’s also beneficial to help them early on.
OR >> I believe it’s essential to support children in their choices and provide guidance early on, as it greatly benefits their growth and development.
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