Do you think it\'s important for kids to have piggy banks or savings?
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I think that saving is important for kids. Kids should have habits saving money. If kids don\'t save money, they won\'t save money after being adults.
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I think that saving is important for kids.
>> OR: I believe that saving is important for young people.
Kids should have habits saving money.
>> Kids should develop the habit of saving money.
>> or: Children should have the habit of saving money.
If kids don\'t save money, they won\'t save money after being adults.
>> If people didn\'t save money when they were kids, they would do the same when they are adults.
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