Do you think it’s important to have many friends or just a few? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that number of friends is not important. the quality is more important than number.
As time goes by, the number of friends decrease naturally.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
I believe that number of friends is not important.
>> I believe that the number of friends is not important.
the quality is more important than number.
>> Quality is more important than quantity.
As time goes by, the number of friends decrease naturally
>> As time goes by, the number of friends naturally decreases.
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