Do you think it’s moral to sell your private life to the media?

2018-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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It\'s okay to post my privacy, but I think selling my privacy is morally problematic. Because they don\'t know what to do. I’m sorry. I have a promise I can not miss. See you friday~

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ☺

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

Enjoy your date! Have fun!

Talk to you on Friday ♥


It\'s okay to post my privacy, but I think selling my privacy is morally problematic. Because they don\'t know what to do.
>> It\'s okay to post my private life but selling it would be morally problematic.

I’m sorry. I have a promise I can not miss. See you friday~

>> I\'m sorry. I made a promise that I cannot miss. See you on Friday.

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