Do you think it’s morally acceptable to use live animals in research for cosmetics or medicines?

2017-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I agree with this statement. There are two reasons why. The first reason is that it is beneficial for people. If we don't use live animals in research for cosnetics or medicines, we should be test subject and dangerous. Another reason is that we don't have another way to check whether they are good or bad for people. In conclutsion, it is morally acceptable to use live animals in research for cosmetics or medicines

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Hi [이름]!

Keep on improving and using new expressions to develop your writing skills. You can do it! Always aim for your goal!:)

~Kelly^^ 

I agree with this statement.

>> Correct.

There are two reasons why.

>> Correct.
The first reason is that it is beneficial for people.

>> The first reason is that it is beneficial to people.

If we don\'t use live animals in research for cosnetics or medicines, we should be test subject and dangerous.

>> If we don\'t use live animals in research for cosmetics or medicines, we will be used as subjects and it is dangerous.
Another reason is that we don\'t have another way to check whether they are good or bad for people.

>> Correct.
In conclutsion, it is morally acceptable to use live animals in research for cosmetics or medicines

>> In conclusion, it is morally acceptable to use live animals in research for cosmetics or medicines.


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