Do you think it\'s more challenging to set personal or professional goals? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s more challenging to set personal goals.
Because most professional goals are about more studying for work or specific fields.
Also, professional goals are same the goals of the company.
It would be to achieve the amount of work or to grow the company.
However, personal goals are ambiguous and so deep, and more difficult than setting professional goals.
It also includes personality, philosophy in their life, and it also sets philosophical goals.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]! ^^ Your take on personal goals makes a lot of sense to me. It\'s like diving deep into who we are. I would love to hear more about your thoughts on this sometime! Thanks for this. Have a relaxing day ahead! :)
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Do you think it\'s more challenging to set personal or professional goals? Why?
I think it\'s more challenging to set personal goals.
>> Correct
Because most professional goals are about more studying for work or specific fields.
>> Correct
Because most professional goals are about more studying for work or specific fields.
>> Because most professional goals involve studying for work or specific fields.
Also, professional goals are same the goals of the company.
Also, professional goals are same the goals of the company.
>> Also, professional goals are the same as the goals of the company.
>> OR: Also, professional goals align with the goals of the company.
It would be to achieve the amount of work or to grow the company.
It would be to achieve the amount of work or to grow the company.
>> Correct
>> OR: It could be to accomplish a certain amount of work or to contribute to the growth of the company.
However, personal goals are ambiguous and so deep, and more difficult than setting professional goals.
>> OR: It could be to accomplish a certain amount of work or to contribute to the growth of the company.
However, personal goals are ambiguous and so deep, and more difficult than setting professional goals.
>> Correct
>> OR: However, personal goals are often ambiguous and profound, making them more challenging than setting professional goals.
It also includes personality, philosophy in their life, and it also sets philosophical goals.
>> OR: However, personal goals are often ambiguous and profound, making them more challenging than setting professional goals.
It also includes personality, philosophy in their life, and it also sets philosophical goals.
>> It includes personality, philosophy in their life, and the setting of philosophical goals.
>> OR: It involves personality and philosophy in life, including the setting of philosophical goals.
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