Do you think it\'s necessary to have a goal? Why?
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I don\'t think It\'s necessary to have a goal. Because a goal is sometimes change. If I were success my goal, it\'s not necessary. That is just what I want to do.
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I don\'t think It\'s necessary to have a goal.
>>> correct
Because a goal is sometimes change.
>>> OR: Because a goal can sometimes be changed.
If I were success my goal, it\'s not necessary.
>>> I I were to succeed in my goal, it\'s not necessary.
That is just what I want to do.
>>> correct
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