Do you think it\'s necessary to have plastic surgery if you are famous in order to be successful?

2022-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I don\'t think you need to be a celebrity unless you\'re thinking about it. I try something else when I do it. Appearances aren\'t everything.

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

Yes, it\'s our character that stands out in a crowd. We need to express self-love and show it to the world.

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I don\'t think you need to be a celebrity unless you\'re thinking about it.

>> I don\'t think you need to have plastic surgery to be a celebrity unless you are thinking about it.

I try something else when I do it.

>> I would try something else when I think of doing it.

Appearances aren\'t everything.

>> CORRECT

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