Do you think it\'s necessary to wear a dress shirt at work? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think i should usually wear casual clothes but should wear a shirt on important day.
Usually, a little comfortable and casual clothes increase the efficiency of our working,
but I think wear too casual clothes is not good manners.
And I think we should wear a shirt for meetings to customers or important events.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I agree! Casual clothes allow us to work comfortably, but being too casual can look unprofessional. So, when meeting clients or attending business meetings, it would be nice to wear business attire.
-T. Caitlyn
I think i should usually wear casual clothes but should wear a shirt on important day.
>> I think I should usually wear casual clothes, but I should wear a shirt on important days.
Usually, a little comfortable and casual clothes increase the efficiency of our working,
Usually, a little comfortable and casual clothes increase the efficiency of our working,
>> Usually, comfortable and casual clothes increase our work efficiency.
but I think wear too casual clothes is not good manners.
but I think wear too casual clothes is not good manners.
>> But I think wearing clothes that are too casual is not good manners.
And I think we should wear a shirt for meetings to customers or important events.
And I think we should wear a shirt for meetings to customers or important events.
>> And I think we should wear a shirt for meetings with customers or for important events.
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