Do you think it\'s okay to drink rainwater?

2022-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Hi teacher~~ Yesterday we were conversation is good time. Thank you.Have a good day. Homework. Do you think it\'s okay to drink rainwater? Why or why not? Kindly explain your answer in utmost 5 sentences. I think that I\'m not to drink rainwater. In the past air was good. So to drink rainwater was ok. But now I think to drink rainwater is not good. Because rainwater with fine dust etc are mixed. It\'s not good for our body.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Ju [이름]! ^-^

Thank you so much for finding time to answer the homework that I\'ve given.

You did a pretty good job here. I have made some modifications though.

Practice English whenever you can!^^

__Teacher Mayleen :)

Hi teacher~~

Yesterday we were conversation is good time. Thank you.Have a good day.
>>> Hi, Teacher!

>>> Yesterday, we had a fun conversation. Thank you and have a good day.

Homework.

>>> Homework:-
Do you think it\'s okay to drink rainwater? Why or why not? Kindly explain your answer in utmost 5 sentences.

I think that I\'m not to drink rainwater.

>>> I think it\'s not okay to drink rainwater.
In the past air was good.
So to drink rainwater was ok.

>>> In the past, the air was clean, so it\'s okay to drink rainwater.
But now I think to drink rainwater is not good.
Because rainwater with fine dust etc are mixed.

>>> Now, I think it\'s not good to drink rainwater because it is already mixed with pollutants like fine dust.
It\'s not good for our body.

>>> CORRECT

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