Do you think it\'s okay to free animals that have been in captivity all their lives? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I don\'t. Because the animals in the cage from zoo, I think they are very pitiful. And to grow up there is very small. So we need to learn and know about animal\'s precious.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
I agree with your answer. Animals in cages don\'t have any freedom. Let\'s talk more about it later in class. ^_^
~Teacher Erin
No, I don\'t.
>>CORRECT
Because the animals in the cage from zoo,
>>because the animals in the cage from the zoo,
I think they are very pitiful.
>>CORRECT
And to grow up there is very small.
>>And the space is very small for the animals.
So we need to learn and know about animal\'s precious.
>>So we need to learn and know that animals are precious.
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