Do you think it’s possible to immunize all of the world’s population after the COVID-19 vaccine is m
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There are many suspicious glimpses about immunity: the virus would be mutated with many different kinds and kept spreading. In addition, even though people who have recovered from COVID-19 have antibodies, they are also reinfected so some people do not assure that the vaccine is our final destination.
There is no clear evidence about this question, however, my answer is \'Yes, it is.\' As soon as Iicensed vaccines become available, the death and infection rate caused by COVID-19 will be dropped dramatically. Because the vaccines will activate and stimulate our body\'s immune system to recognize the virus and protect from infections so that why we say it is the only way to back to normal life.
I do not have any medical knowledge and when we will have a vaccine, but strongly believe that the government agencies, and medical experts involved in developing, licensing of COVID-19 vaccines do their best effort to make perfect, having no adverse effects vaccines ever had.
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There are many suspicious glimpses about immunity: the virus would be mutated with many different kinds and kept spreading.
>> A number of claims and questions are raised about immunity, such as the virus would mutate into many different kinds and keep spreading.
In addition, even though people who have recovered from COVID-19 have antibodies, they are also reinfected so some people do not assure that the vaccine is our final destination.
>> In addition, even though patients who have recovered from COVID-19 have antibodies, they are also reinfected so some people don\'t feel assured that the existence of a vaccine would be the end of this pandemic.
There is no clear evidence about this question, however, my answer is \'Yes, it is.\'
>> There is no clear evidence that supports either a positive or negative answer to this question, however, my answer is \'Yes, it is.\'
As soon as Iicensed vaccines become available, the death and infection rate caused by COVID-19 will be dropped dramatically. Because the vaccines will activate and stimulate our body\'s immune system to recognize the virus and protect from infections so that why we say it is the only way to back to normal life.
>> As soon as Iicensed vaccines become available, the death and infection rate caused by COVID-19 will drop dramatically because the vaccines will activate and stimulate our body\'s immune system to recognize the virus and protect us from infections that\'s why we say it is the only way to go back to normal life.
I do not have any medical knowledge and when we will have a vaccine, but strongly believe that the government agencies, and medical experts involved in developing, licensing of COVID-19 vaccines do their best effort to make perfect, having no adverse effects vaccines ever had.
>> I do not have any medical knowledge nor do I know when we will have a vaccine, but I strongly believe that the government agencies, and medical experts involved in the developing and licensing of COVID-19 vaccines are doing their best effort to perfect the vaccines and make sure that there are no adverse effects.
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