Do you think it\'s smart to free animals that have been in captivity all their lives? Why or why not
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I think they can play in the territory that the owner of the animal has chosen. It needs to be uner control for sure. The lareger it is, the better for the anmial. I hope animals can meet good owners
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I think they can play in the territory that the owner of the animal has chosen.
>> or: I think they can play in the area that the owner of the animal has chosen.
It needs to be under control for sure.
>> correct
The larger it is, the better for the animal.
>> correct
I hope animals can meet good owners.
>> correct
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