Do you think it would be a good idea to have 3 days worth of weekends? Explain your answer.

2021-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I personally think it\'s better to have a three-day weekend. Of course, if you take a three-day break, you can think that less work. However, I think I can work with more certainty and concentration when I work. Because I think I can work with more energy since I took a lot of rest. I think it is better to work effectively in a short time than to work a lot.

강사 첨삭

Hi Steve! Yes this might be true. It would feel nice to have a long vacation every week. Although we might have the luxury of having 3 days off but there would be so many disadvantages in the economy which would affect our lives greatly. I think it also depends on the person on how he/she is going to interpret it. :)

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I personally think it\'s better to have a three-day weekend.
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Of course, if you take a three-day break, you can think that less work.
>> Of course, if you take a three-day break, you can think that you would have less work.

However, I think I can work with more certainty and concentration when I work.
>> However, I think I can work with more certainty and concentration when I have more free time.

Because I think I can work with more energy since I took a lot of rest.
>> Another reason is that, I think I can work more with more energy since I ca take lot of rest.

I think it is better to work effectively in a short time than to work a lot.
>>I think it is better to work effectively in a short time than to work in a long period of time.

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