Do you think it would be a good idea to have 3 days worth of weekends? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s good idea but it\'ll not happened in korea. Here\'s a sentence in korea.
Monday tuesday wednesday Thursday Friday Friday Friday. This sentence means workers in korea work in weekend too. Actually, If I started to work, I am worried about losing my weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Wow. That\'s labor abuse already. People should be entitled to have at least 1-2 days off in a week. I hope that the salary would be worth it if that\'s the case. :(
Monday tuesday wednesday Thursday Friday Friday Friday.
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I think it\'s good idea but it\'ll not happened in korea.
>> I think it\'s good idea but it\'ll not happen in Korea.
Here\'s a sentence in korea.
>> There\'s a saying here in Korea, \"Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Friday, Friday\".
Monday tuesday wednesday Thursday Friday Friday Friday.
>>CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
This sentence means workers in korea work in weekend too.
>> This sentence means workers in Korea work during the weekends too.
Actually, If I started to work, I am worried about losing my weekend.
>> Actually, I am a bit worried that I\'m going to loose my weekends off when I start working.
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