Do you think it would be a good idea to have 3 days worth of weekends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it would be a great idea. Actually, I rest only one day in a week and it’s too short for me. I always hope that I can rest for two days. But if weekend become 3 days then I can rest more. So I think it would be a good idea.
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Hi [이름]! I feel bad for you. I think out of all people, this would benefit you the most. I hope that your agency would consider giving you more rest days in the future. :)
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I think it would be a great idea.
>> CORRECT
Actually, I rest only one day in a week and it’s too short for me.
>> Actually, I only have 1 rest day on a week and it\'s way too short for me.
I always hope that I can rest for two days.
>> CORRECT
But if weekend become 3 days then I can rest more.
>> Although, if weekends become 3 days, then I would have more time to rest.
So I think it would be a good idea.
>>CORRECT
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