Do you think job satisfaction is more important than salary when choosing a job?

2018-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Yes, I think that. Because doing my satisfaction job is happy to me. Also I want to be a lawyer, But when I'm not become a lawyer and just have to doing my task with salary, It will be sad.

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Yes, I think that. Because doing my satisfaction job is happy to me. Also I want to be a lawyer, But when I\'m not become a lawyer and just have to doing my task with salary, It will be sad.



I think job satisfaction is more important than salary, because if I am satisfied in my job, I would be happy. Also, I want to be a lawyer, but when I couldn\'t become one and just have a random job, I wouldn\'t be satisfied.


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