Do you think job security is more or less important than job satisfaction? Why?
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In my opinion,job security is more important
and is prioritized than job satisfaction.
Job security make people feel satisfied and work efficiently.
Both of them have complementary relationship each other at work.
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In my opinion, job security is more important and is prioritized than job satisfaction.>> In my opinion, job security is more important and should be prioritized over job satisfaction.
Job security make people feel satisfied and work efficiently.
Job security make people feel satisfied and work efficiently.
>> Job security makes people feel secure and helps them work efficiently.
Both of them have complementary relationship each other at work.
Both of them have complementary relationship each other at work.
>> Both of them have a complementary relationship with each other at work.
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