Do you think K-pop accurately shows or represents Korean culture?
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K-Pop has been great representative of Korea. Which idol shows korea’s identity. Also the songs are including Korean and it’s spreading Hangul to foreigners. I think it has been great on spreading Korean culture, but these days, too much English lyrics and more foreigner members in the group or hiding Korean identity in the K-pop.
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K-Pop has been great representative of Korea. Which idol shows korea’s identity.
>>> K-Pop has been a great representation of Korea where idols show or embody Korea’s identity.
Also the songs are including Korean and it’s spreading Hangul to foreigners.
>>> Also, the songs are in Korean and it’s spreading Hangul to foreigners.
I think it has been great on spreading Korean culture, but these days, too much English lyrics and more foreigner members in the group or hiding Korean identity in the K-pop.
>>> I think it has been great on spreading Korean culture. But these days, too much English lyrics and more foreigner members in the group are diminishing the Korean identity in K-pop.
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