Do you think kindergarten should be mandatory for all children? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
i think kindergarten should be mandatory for all children.
because, young children are lacking all knowledge.
so professional knowledge teachers have to teaching young children.
sure of i think most parents have knowledge,
but different to professional knowledge teachers.
and when since young Social experience is good.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I agree with you that kindergarten should be mandatory, not only for students to learn but also for them to socialize at a young age. I think being exposed to studying and playing with other kids can help them develop not only mentally but physically and emotionally as well.
- T. Caitlyn
i think kindergarten should be mandatory for all children.
>> CORRECT
because, young children are lacking all knowledge.
because, young children are lacking all knowledge.
>> Young children lack basic knowledge.
so professional knowledge teachers have to teaching young children.
so professional knowledge teachers have to teaching young children.
>> So professional teachers have to teach young children.
sure of i think most parents have knowledge, but different to professional knowledge teachers.
sure of i think most parents have knowledge, but different to professional knowledge teachers.
>> Of course, I think most parents have knowledge, but it’s different from professional teachers.
and when since young Social experience is good.
>> And social experience from a young age is good.
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