Do you think Korean cuisine is healthier compare to other country\'s food? why do you say so?
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Yes. I could say so.
Because, in most cases,Korean dishes are boild,steamed and blanched.
Those food have low calories and can be digest easily due to less oily.
To sorry, many Korean getting eat more western food in theseday.
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Thank you for this Ms. [이름]!
Yes, I could say so.
>>> correct
Because, in most cases,Korean dishes are boild,steamed and blanched.
Because, in most cases,Korean dishes are boild,steamed and blanched.
>>> Because in most cases, Korean dishes are boiled, steamed and blanched.
Those food have low calories and can be digest easily due to less oily.
>>> Those food have low calories and can be digested easily due to being less oily.
To sorry, many Korean getting eat more western food in theseday.
>>> Unfortunately, many Koreans get to eat more Western food in these days.
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