Do you think Koreans generally look better today than when cosmetic surgery wasn't as common?

2012-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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I think that Koreans generally look better today. It's quite clear when you compare them to their ancestors shown in old pictures. But I think that's because now people are getting well nourished. Regarding to the cosmetic surgery, many Koreans eager to have a westernized appearance and more and more people endure the risks to get this kind of procedure. Media also encourages people to have the westernized beauty criteria. So I can say that "Koreans generally look WESTERNIZED today than when cosmetic surgery wasn't so common". There always is a trend in the history which overwhelms people and they want to follow it all the time. However, no trend can stay forever. Few decades later, we could have a different trend. Maybe many it-girls will follow it. T.Faye, I'm going on a business trip to China. We can continue our class from Friday(3/16).

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Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework right away. I really appreciate it. If you are going to hold our class for important purposes please call our Korean Manager so that he will fix your schedule or if not you can also leave a message on the service board on the website. I am not allowed to change your schedule. It has to pass through our Korean Manager and he will be changing your schedule. If you read this before leaving please inform our Manager right away. Thank you. Teacher Faye Here are your corrections: I think that Koreans generally look better today.  >>Correct!It\'s quite clear when you compare them to their ancestors shown in old pictures. >>Correct!But I think that\'s because now people are getting well nourished. >>But I think that\'s because people now are well nourished. Regarding to the cosmetic surgery, many Koreans eager to have a westernized appearance and more and more people endure the risks to get this kind of procedure. >>With regards to cosmetic surgery, many Koreans are eager to have a westernized look and more people endure the risks just to have this kind of procedure. Media also encourages people to have the westernized beauty criteria. >>Media also encourages the people to have a westernized look.So I can say that \"Koreans generally look WESTERNIZED today than when cosmetic surgery wasn\'t so common\".>>Correct!There always is a trend in the history which overwhelms people and they want to follow it all the time. >>There is always a trend in history which overwhelms the people and that they want to follow it all the time. However, no trend can stay forever. >>Correct! Few decades later, we could have a different trend. >>Correct! Maybe many it-girls will follow it.>>Correct!T.Faye, I\'m going on a business trip to China. >>T.Faye, I\'m going to China for a business trip. We can continue our class from Friday(3/16). >>Can we continue our class on Friday [3/16]?

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