Do you think learning how to play an instrument is important? Why or why not?

2022-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I have to say that It\'s not important. It depends on whether people like to play an instrument or not. But I want to learn playing piano someday.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]:)

Yes, you are correct. If you want to pursue this kind of career then learning how to play an instrument can be beneficial for you.

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I have to say that It\'s not important.

>> I have to say that it is not important.

It depends on whether people like to play an instrument or not.

>> CORRECT

But I want to learn playing piano someday.

>> But I want to learn how to play a piano someday.

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