Do you think listening to music while studying helps or distracts you? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like listening to music while studying.
Because I think music disturb me to concentrate on studying.
I like studying in clam and peaceful environment, but a little background noise is okay.
Actually, I prefer to listen music while working, especially when I work on a paper work like creating a report.
Because I don\'t need to concentrate on it very much, I just need time to type.
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Here are some things to note:
1. I don\'t like listening to music while studying.
>>CORRECT!
2. Because I think music disturb me to concentrate on studying.
>>I think music disturbs my concentration while studying.
3. I like studying in clam and peaceful environment, but a little background noise is okay.
>>I like studying in a calm and peaceful environment, but a little background noise is okay.
4. Actually, I prefer to listen music while working, especially when I work on a paper work like creating a report.
>>Actually, I prefer listening to music while working, especially when I’m doing paperwork like creating reports.
5. Because I don\'t need to concentrate on it very much, I just need time to type.
>>I don’t need to concentrate on it very much; I just need time to type.
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