Do you think luck plays a part in your life? Are you generally lucky or unlucky
학생이 쓴 원문
I regard myself as a lucky person in many ways. I have great parents who I did not choose. Even though my parents are not rich - they are a typical middle class family-, but they always love and support me. Due to my parents, I could grow up without big problems.
In addition after graduate university, I luckly find the job which I still have worked for. when I was find a job, I had not understood very well about a bank as a work place. I decided to work here, cause they first decided hire me. however, I have worked for 13 years this year, and I really love my job. Isn\'t it lucky?
After I got married I wish to and try to have a baby, but for 7 years it failed. But fortunately now I have two children and they are a boy and girl. I have both a son and a daughter. I think I am a quite lucky man.
Everyone life has up an down andI believe the life is like a treasure from hide and seek. If someone try to find happy moments of life, he will be a lucky man.
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Good evning, [이름]!^^
Thank you for always doing your homework. Keep on expressing your thoughts. See you later in class. ^_^
Even though my parents are not rich - they are a typical middle class family-, but they always love and support me.
>>>Even though my parents are not rich, they are typical middle class family, but they always love and support me.
Due to my parents, I could grow up without big problems.
>>>With the help of my parents, I grew up without having big problems.
In addition after graduate university, I luckly find the job which I still have worked for.
>>>In addition, I luckily found a job in which I\'m still working on after graduating from a university.
when I was find a job, I had not understood very well about a bank as a work place.
>>>When I found a job, I didn\'t understand very well how to work in a bank.
I decided to work here, cause they first decided hire me.
>>>I decided to work here because they were the first one who hired me.
however, I have worked for 13 years this year, and I really love my job. Isn\'t it lucky?
>>>However, I have been working here for 13 years now and I really love my job. Isn\'t it lucky?
After I got married I wish to and try to have a baby, but for 7 years it failed.
>>>After getting married, I wished and tried to have a baby for 7 years but I failed.
But fortunately now I have two children and they are a boy and girl.
>>>Fortunately, now I have two children, a boy and a girl.I think I am a quite lucky man.
I think I am a quite lucky man.
>>>I think I am quite a lucky man.
Everyone life has up an down andI believe the life is like a treasure from hide and seek.
>>>Everyone\'s life has ups an downs and I believe that life is like a treasure like hide and seek.
If someone try to find happy moments of life, he will be a lucky man.
>>>If someone tries to find happy moments of his life then he will be a lucky man.
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