Do you think marriage is important? Why or why not?
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No, I don\'t. I think that marriage is not important because marriage is not all of life. Without husband or wife, I can do many things, but I will be lonely. However, I think that advantages are more than disadvantages. So, I think that marriage is not important. However, I want marry in the future because I always thought that if I live with my husband and children like my family, I will be very happy. I want to make a peaceful family like my family! (My family means my current family.)
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Hi Kimberly:)
Marriage is the beginning—the beginning of the family—and is a life-long commitment. It also provides an opportunity to grow in selflessness as you serve your wife and children. Marriage is more than a physical union; it is also a spiritual and emotional union. This union mirrors the one between God and His Church.
Still, it\'s not for everyone.
No, I don\'t.
>> CORRECT
I think that marriage is not important because marriage is not all of life.
>> I think that marriage is not important because it is not the only thing in life.
Without husband or wife, I can do many things, but I will be lonely.
>> I can do many things when I am not married but I will be lonely.
However, I think that advantages are more than disadvantages.
>> However, I think there are more advantages that disadvantages to it.
So, I think that marriage is not important.
>> CORRECT
However, I want marry in the future because I always thought that if I live with my husband and children like my family, I will be very happy.
>> However, I want marry in the future because I always thought that if I live with my husband and children, I will be very happy.
I want to make a peaceful family like my family!
>> CORRECT
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