Do you think marriage is important? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it\'s not important in generation now. The times have changed and there are a lot of things to bear If I get married. I don\'t think welfare is that good in South Korea. But the dating is important. Anyway, Thank you for sharing the video. Dr.dre and Eminem are still cool~~~~
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Hi Elic:)
Yes, marriage is not that important nowadays because everyone is already doing what married couples do already. Although for some people, it\'s still important and sacred.
PS: No worries! It was indeed very cool. Hahaha!
I think it\'s not important in generation now.
>> I think it\'s not important in the generation now.
The times have changed and there are a lot of things to bear If I get married.
>> The times have changed and there are a lot of things to bear if I get married.
I don\'t think welfare is that good in South Korea.
>> I don\'t think that the welfare in South Korea is good.
But the dating is important.
>> But dating is still important.
Anyway, Thank you for sharing the video. Dr.dre and Eminem are still cool
>> Anyways, thank you for sharing the video of Dr. [Name] and Eminem. It was so cool.
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