Do you think marriage is important? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think marriage is important? Why or why not?
Marriage is not necessary in my life. It is not meant for everyone.
I think that it is a personal choice.
Some people are afraid of being alone. That’s why they decide to get married.
These ideas that it make them happy by marriage.
I am ready to get married whenever I meet my soulmate.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
I hope you meet your soul mate very soon. :)
Marriage is not necessary in my life.
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It is not meant for everyone.
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I think that it is a personal choice.
>> CORRECT
Some people are afraid of being alone.
>> CORRECT
That’s why they decide to get married.
>> CORRECT
These ideas that it make them happy by marriage.
>> These ideas make them happy because of marriage.
I am ready to get married whenever I meet my soulmate.
>> CORRECT
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